TeaTimeSunday / SONNETS
BUFFY-VERSE SERIES (26-27)  SONNETS #28-29 of 154  (30-31)
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SPECIAL:REWRITING A BUFFY SONG (2) BtVS EPISODE #5 (1.5) "Never Kill a Boy on the First Date" ONE-HAIKU (EPISODE) RECAP: The one where Buffy has a date and saves the world ... (but the two don't mix) |
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Buffy Verse for TEA TIME (Sonnets #28-29) SINGING LESSON: re-versing a Joss song from OMWF ORIGINALLY POSTED AT (UPN) WWW.BUFFY.COM ... BEFORE ALL FORUMS WERE DELETED 9/19/02 ... CLICK THE BRONZE SKULL TO SEE ARCHIVE COPY OF (NONCOLOR) VERSION (FOR COMPARISON) |
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REMINDER: Tea Time (in L.A.) Portal materializes at top of threaded forum at 7:00 PM Bronze Posted by: forensicpoetry - Apr 04, 2002, 2:57 PM FIRST: Go sing the song at tid=60165
rhetorical verse in Shakespearean sonnet form }
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Why match the rhythm Joss used with new rhymes
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that fit his pattern, but give sound new spin?
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Not something that I'd do too many times, . . .
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of rhetoric, of poetry, of mind.
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I'm searching for a metaphor that will
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reveal a line of sight to which I'm blind -- . . .
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BUT metaphors -- like Oracles -- may hide
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their gift of wisdom -- may well not allow
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transmission --- as their meanings sub-divide . . .
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No marriage of your visions. A divorce.
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SO, MAYBE I will let my muse go play.
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Just for the moment, "clarity" my goal.
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Straight talk about that song here on display.
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As sonneteering slayers I enroll, . . .
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The joy of singing may bring in the fun
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to verse endeavors with more heavy mass.
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Leave hard-book thoughts. We're off to beachy sun . . .
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How can you smack a spike without a net? {g}
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(Who do you think you are? Just lazy fans?!?) {ewg}
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In time, the ball within the lines. No sweat.
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Just sing the song. You'll get what there's to get. {SMILE}
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