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(pt.1)
Sonnetizing BtVS#11 "INVISIBLE GIRL" (for Tea Time in L.A.
#22) Sonnets #42-43
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 Rhetorical Verse (in Shakespearean
sonnet form) about BtVS#11 "INVISIBLE
GIRL" Posted by: forensicpopouri - Apr 15, 2002, 10:15
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VISIBLE CRUELTY
(8-sonnet sequence)
THE QUALITY OF
BEAUTY is much strained
when artists
stretch beyond their competence
to capture
the complexity contained
in social
interaction's violence.
In
prehistoric days, the shunned would
die.
Except for Ayla,* who could stand
alone
without the tribe? No need to
crucify.
There was no pizza shop the cursed
could call.
If excommunicated,
you would starve.
If no one
LISTENED to your pleading
voice.
When tribal eyes refused to
LOOK, they carve
you from
what's life itself. No second
choice.
But do not turn to Hollywood to
LEARN
what, first-hand, "the
unpopular" discern.
(*CLAN OF
THE CAVE BEAR)
(2) YOU
SAY, "OLD HIST'RY." Now the world has
changed.
If school tribes shut you out,
that's just a game
that soon will fade --
UNLESS you are deranged
enough to care
enough to kill and maim . . .
. . . the
ones who choose to never see your face,
or,
"better yet," who choose to take the
time
to fire word paint-balls -- mark you
for disgrace.
With words and silence
girl-slights are "sublime."
They stand
in "huddles" giving others "deaths"
--
those with'ring stares of condescension
meant
to say "we will not deign to waste
our breaths
on worthless nothings.
Stay out of our
tent!"
Exclusion that the
popular enforce
on "others." What "the
cool" teach in their
course.
[CONTINUED IN PART
2]
you
speak
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 CORRECTION: There was no pizza shop the
cursed could CALL.
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - Apr 16, 2002, 3:32
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| THAT LINE SHOULD
READ:
There was no pizza shop the cursed
could phone.
NOTE: Must rhyme
with "alone." ("Call" and "Phone" mean the same, so I
thought one thing, and wrote another. I.E., My
Bad.)

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tid=69275
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - Apr 15, 2002, 4:22
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| REMINDER :
TEA
TIME CORKBOARD appears at 4:00 PM Bronze Time
TEA
TIME in L.A. appears at 7:00 PM Bronze
Time
QUESTIONS? See the CORKBOARD
NOTE: NEW CORKBOARD IS UP AT
tid=69871

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 PART 2 continues at
tid=69275
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - Apr 15, 2002, 4:08
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| REMINDER :
TEA
TIME CORKBOARD appears at 4:00 PM Bronze Time
TEA
TIME in L.A. appears at 7:00 PM Bronze
Time
QUESTIONS? See the CORKBOARD
NOTE: NEW CORKBOARD IS UP AT
tid=69811

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 merv - nope, this post took 1600
charcters with html codes
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - Apr 15, 2002, 11:29
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| As I said in your TOP
SECRET MESSAGE <smile> (didn't think you'd be
back<g>)
Today was an unusual day. (an 8
sonnet sequence) Normally two sonnets. Fits in one
post.
But who know . . . may go to 16 sonnets
tomorrow. <ewg>
later.

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 Umm, then you could have put 3 in 2 thus
not making 4 :)
| Posted by:
merv - Apr 15, 2002, 11:22
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 merv . . . 1800
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - Apr 15, 2002, 11:11
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| Hi merv . . . Yep.
Two sonnets fit in 1800 characters. This post
has 2 sonnets in it. <smile> (Wrote 8
sonnets today.)

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 Forensic my friend.....
| Posted by:
merv - Apr 15, 2002, 10:41
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| ..I'm so glad you
mastered *big* in html.
But, you could get 2
Sonnets on one postas it can support 1800 characters.
About the number in Shakespear's Plays?

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| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - Apr 15, 2002, 10:24
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| REMINDER :
TEA
TIME CORKBOARD appears at 4:00 PM Bronze
Time
TEA TIME in L.A. appears at 7:00 PM Bronze
Time
QUESTIONS? See the CORKBOARD

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