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Rhetorical verse for Tea Time in
L.A.#26-Please do not post comments here(use the
Posted by: forensicpopouri - Apr 19, 2002, 10:10
RE: BtVS 2.3 SCHOOL
AND THEN CAME TWO (Spike
& Dru Slay Me)
verse in Shakesperean sonnet
SONNET SEQUENCE (1 of
THE MOMENT angry
wrinklies smooth to care . .
THE MOMENT when his heart
steps past his grin . . .
love arrives . . . when he's aware . .
HER PRESENCE fills his soul
. . . as she walks in . . .
. . . OR
WOULD . . . if soul he had . . .
BUT he has none.
That's the vampire theory we've been
LIKE: Vampires cannot go
into the sun.
AND: It's with wooden
stakes they must be fought.
WHEN this golden vampire's eyes
the madness of her beauty --
COULD YOU DOUBT
soulless villain" wears upon his face
perfect simulation of devout . .
. . . pure, holy, sacred,
(Why ruin this perfect
thought with sodding "dove"?)
Thanks for not commenting in this thread
. . . (SONNET SEQUENCE CONTINUES
forensicpopouri - Apr 19, 2002, 10:16
NOTE: (error in #'s)
Sonnets 66-69 (not 62-65)
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Tea Time #25 CORKBOARD appears at 4:00 PM BRONZE TIME
2 of 4 (SONNET
forensicpopouri - Apr 19, 2002, 10:13
(2) A G*D
DAMNED rebel vampire . . . WITH A
(NO puny Mitsubishi . . . BUT
A DODGE . . .
. . . Desoto FireFlight,
Fifty-eight.) A STAR . . .
presence . . . who would soon dislodge . .
. . . "annoying" "big-bad" Collin --
his ageless vampire
costume since last year,
surprising God-like Joss
who should have known
that children change in
size so much it's clear . . .
. . . this
ain't no vampire, buddy, just a kid.
A boring kid
at that. GOOD LORD, ENOUGH!
I'm writing 'bout new
Spike, then flip my lid
to ramble out a mile of
kiddy fluff . . .)
AS I WAS SAYING 'fore
I ran off track.
A STAR. TWO STARS. Two actors
with "the knack."
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forensicpopouri - Apr 19, 2002, 10:12
(3) WHAT'S UP
WITH BUFFY in this episode
and his Drusilla come to town.
I guess you'd
say SHE hit the mother lode
credibility -- turned upside down . .
. . . maternal disappointment into
The fact that Buffy's faced
down death each week
meant "nothing" 'till her
mother opened wide
her peepers. Saw her
daughter cheek to cheek . . .
. . . with
deadly evil. Saw that evil blinked.
resourceful daughter who thought first
others as Spike's soulless soldiers
about the school to satisfy their thirst
. . .
It changed the theme when momma
saved her butt.
cracks Spike's head like a
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forensicpopouri - Apr 19, 2002, 10:11
There's more to say "'bout that," but Spike &
are really all I want to sing
How perfectly the actors, writers
created pure, spectacular, delight .
. . . by snapping vivid charcters
Two characters who clicked from the word
Two characters carved by the finest
Two characters so sharp they raised the
How marvelously crazy, vile, and sweet
. . .
Drusilla. Oh, Drusilla. Bless your
stars . . .
(One day you'll name them all. One
No single tiny false move ever
mars . . .
. . . the chemistry of evil
that's so good
between these mighty two.
(As if it could.)