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SONNETS
#147-50 of 154 for Tea Time in L.A. #49 of 50 - TWO LET
GO
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Rhetorical verse for Tea Time in
L.A. #49 - (Talking about Buffy as Shakespeare
would have. <g>)
Posted by: forensicpopouri - May 21, 2002, 2:42
AM
Sonnets #147-150 of
154
So close to 154 you can
taste it.
<ewg>
TWO
LET
GO
rhetorical
verse in Shakespearean sonnet
form
READ
TODAY'S ENTIRE 4-SONNET SEQUENCE. . . POSTED
BELOW
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INDEX TO ALL PREVIOUS
SONNETS IS POSTED BELOW TODAY'S
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CORRECTION (sonnet 3) Like Buffy's world
where she's had her LAST breath
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - May 21, 2002, 3:51
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CORRECTION (sonnet 4) YES even in the
case OF whining Dawn,
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forensicpopouri - May 21, 2002, 3:59
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CORRECTION (sonnet 3) no matter if YOUR
ego is deceived.
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - May 21, 2002, 3:02
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CORRECTION (TITLE for all 4 parts is) TWO
LET GO
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - May 21, 2002, 2:54
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NOTE: The Title for
the entire 4-sonnet sequence below is "Two Let
Go"
Two segments are incorrectly labled as "To Let
Go" and "Saving the World"
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1- of 4 (sonnet sequence) TWO LET
GO
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - May 21, 2002, 2:51
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HAIKU
PROLOGUE
Writing in the void
before the season
ending
final episodes.
TEA TIME
SONNETS #147-150 of 154
Rhetorical
verse in Shakespearean sonnet
form
TWO LET
GO
(1) I'LL SPEND TONIGHT
regretting what was lost.
Two lines of
verse that crystalized my thought
across the
Buffyverse . . . A Pentecost
of flaming
inspiration that had brought . . .
. . .
transcendent revelation to my tongue.
I spoke
them in the shower. Knew them cold.
They chimed
their notes so well you'd think they'd sung
a
tune I would remember 'till I'm old.
No need
to stop relaxing in the flow
of streaming water .
. . cleansing 'way the sweat
of disciplined
exersions's afterglow.
I thought the lines
secured within the net . . .
. . . of memory.
So I felt there's no need
to rush out of that
shower with great speed.
[CONTINUED
BELOW]
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2-3 of 4 (sonnet sequence) TO LET GO
cont.
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - May 21, 2002, 2:49
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(2) I'M SURE
there's times that happened to Joss,
too.
And Marti Noxon. Ev'ry writers'
curse
is always to have notepads . . . 'cept
the few
times that you don't. You scream.
There's nothing worse . . .
. . . than
losing the best thought you've ever
had
right down the drain where it goes out to
sea.
I guarantee the next idea is
bad.
That's how a writer learns the cruelty . .
.
. . .of fate that writers deal with . . .
with each choice
of color on their palette they
now dab
and brush upon their canvas. Then
rejoice
for one artistic vict'ry in their lab . .
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. . . of existential beauty
codified
within their private matrix where they
hide . . .
(3) . . . from harsh reality where
death is death.
Instead of worlds where death can
be reversed.
Like Buffy's world where
she's had her least breath
three times (I think)
and feels not blessed but cursed . . .
. . .
to be a pawn of those who need her face.
No
matter if that's Willow or it's
Joss.
NO PEACE for Buffy's soul in
either case.
Their frameworks cannot take their
slayer's loss.
YES, sentences can paint the
world again,
BUT ev'rything that's written's not
believed.
The rhetoric you choose won't always
win,
no matter if you ego is
deceived.
And tragic'ly, the ones that slip
your mind
are ones that you should not have left
behind.
[CONTINUED BELOW]
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4 of 4 (sonnet sequence) SAVING THE WORLD
cont.
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - May 21, 2002, 2:48
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(4) THERE'S
ALWAYS forward strokes that you can take,
but
some lead to high falls . . . or calm dead
ends.
YET in forgotten lines left in your
wake
are ripples that may yet make full amends .
. .
. . . and bring transcendence after your
regrets
have filled your night of longing for
lost lines.
THE TRUTH is that whatever one
forgets
was fated to come back when one refines .
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. . . the soul that wasn't ready to move
on
to higher levels of what God has
planned.
YES even in the case fo whining
Dawn,
there will arise amidst chaotic sand
. . .
. . . some sweet felicity somone
forgot.
Like those two lines tonight I
liked a lot.
[THE
END]
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NOTES
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| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - May 21, 2002, 2:47
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FOR LINKS (Bronze
tids) TO ALL PREVIOUS SONNETS SCROLL
DOWN
Final episode of Tea Time in L.A. (7-8
PM BRONZE TIME) is Wed. 5/22
REMINDER 2: A
weekly version (still being designed) to be
called
TeaTimeSunday 4-5PM BRONZE TIME (every
Sunday)
begins on June 2
NOTE: The
insane idea of putting Buffy thoughts
in
Shakespearean sonnet form . . . is based on the
even more
insane idea that you might want to give it
a try yourself.
For a "sonnetized" explanation of
why this is not insane <g> . . . you might
read
my previous Bronze threads WHY I POST IN
SHAKESPEAREAN SONNETS:
PART 1: tid=48156
PART 2: tid=48152
FOR MORE INFO SEE THE
MOST RECENT TEA TIME CORKBOARD
at
http://www.buffy.com/bronze_posts.jsp?tid=145375
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INDEX TO PREVIOUSLY POSTED TEA TIME
SONNETS: (PART 1)
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - May 21, 2002, 2:46
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#1: BEYOND "NORMAL
AGAIN" - tid=46649
#2: RILEY & SAM'S
GROWN-UP-ITUDE - tid=47071
#3: WHAT DO WE HOLD
SACRED? - tid=47636
#4-7 WHY I POST IN
SHAKESPEAREAN SONNETS (4-sonnet sequence)
PART
1 - tid=48156
PART 2 - tid=48152
#8
DOUBLEMEAT MORALITY - tid=49007
#9-12 ALL MUSICAL
BUFFY (4-sonnnet sequence)
PART 1 -
tid=50573
PART 2 - tid=50575
#13-14
SONNET SCHOOL FOR SLAYERS - tid=50974
#15
BRING THE FUN IN - tid=51492
#16 NORMAL AGAIN:
IT'S ALL SO CLEAR - tid=52886
#17-20 IN THE
BEGINNING
PART 1 - tid=53362
PART 2 -
tid=53363
#21-24 HARVEST?
PART 1 -
tid=53901
PART 2 - tid=53900
#25 WRITING
THE BALLAD OF SMG - tid=55217
#26-27 DESTINY
4/03/02 - tid=58191
#28-29 SINGING LESSON
(SMG BALLAD PT 2)- tid=61131
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INDEX TO PREVIOUSLY POSTED TEA TIME
SONNETS (PART 2)
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - May 21, 2002, 2:45
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#30-31 THE PORTAL
& (BtVS#6) "The Pack" - tid=63216
#32-33 BtVS
#7 "Angel" - tid=65915
#34-37 BTVS #8 "I Robot,
You Jane"
PART 1 - tid=67039
PART 2 -
tid=67038
#38 -"The Puppet Show" (The Talent
Show) tid=68038
#39 - Tea Time Miscommunication
(Apology to yelnif) - tid=68039
#40-41 - DREAMER
ZERO (re BtVS#10 -"Nightmares") -
tid=68694
#42-49 - VISIBLE CRUELTY (re BtVS#11 -
"Invisible Girl") -
PART 1 - tid=69276
PART 2 -
tid=69275
PART 3 - tid=69274
PART 4 -
tid=69273
#50-57 - DO I HAVE TO? (re BtVS#12 -
"Prophecy Girl") - tid=71591
#58-61 -
RESURRECTION'S A BITCHA (re BtVS#13 "When She Was Bad")
- tid=73798
#62-65 - PARTLY LOVE (re BtVS#14
"Some Assembly Required) - tid=75553
#66-69 - AND
THEN CAME TWO (Spike & Dru) (BtVS#15 "School Hard")
- tid=77213
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INDEX TO PREVIOUSLY POSTED TEA TIME
SONNETS (PART 3)
| Posted by:
forensicpopouri - May 21, 2002, 2:44
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#70-73 (TT28)
SACRIFICE - tid=80713
#74-77 (TT29) CHARMED
(LIVES) - tid=81875
#78-81 (TT 30) SLANDERING
JANUS - tid=83534
#82-85 (TT 31) MORE GRAY -
tid=86715
#86 (TT33) AN EMPTY SPACE IN THE SOUL
(sermonette)- tid=90275
#87-90 (TT35) CONSTRAINTS
- tid=97955
#91-94 (TT36) NORMAL SNORE-MAL -
tid=102075
#95 (TT37) NOTHING TO SING ABOUT -
tid=102735
#96-104 (TT38) BUFFY-DREAMS -
tid=105077
#105-108 (TT39) GUYS! -
tid=107497
#109-112 (TT40) SPIKE'S SPECIAL
BLEND (PART 1) - tid=116315
#113-116
(TT42) SPIKE'S SPECIAL BLEND (Part 2) -
tid=123717
#117-120 "119 - 28 = 91" -
tid=124395
#121-124 XANDER'S SPECIAL HELL -
tid=124807
#125-126 (TT43)"PERVERSITY"
& "RHYMING VERSE IN THE BUFFYVERSE"
tid=125844
#127-130 (TT44) "SPIKE'S SPECIAL
BLEND(3)" & "DEADLY PROPRIETY" -
tid=127691
#131-134 (TT45) BIG BAD WILLOW/SPIKE -
tid=132137
#135-138 (TT46) UNFORGIVENESS -
tid=137623
#139-142 (TT47) UNPOETIC HEROS ARE ALL
WET - tid=141161
#143-146 (TT48) SAVING THE WORLD
- tid=144377
#147-150 (TT49) TWO LET GO -
(today's)
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